Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Premise

by designrfix.com


When I incarnate again –
embrace me, embrace me
the longest way
you may...
pray,
whispering affirmation,
savoring forth,
filling the breathing
through pores
with multi-hued shadows
coloration,
so when I later
fly away,
throwing
bursting crystals
beneath, -
turning to wave,
you will see
beautiful
sun flared
Phoenix…

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8 comments:

  1. The ending is so empowering. I enjoy the image of the 'beautiful sun flared Phoenix."

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  2. I love the closing image. "beautiful sun-flared Phoenix".

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  3. Phoenix rising and your love witnessing it. Yes.

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  4. rebirth... as a dazzling star...the ending really made the poem...

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  5. beautiful sun flared phoenix......i love this splendour

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