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nice...each of these is like a facet of our illusions...def when attached to a grain of truth they can be deadly...think i like hte middle one best..
illusions can sure leave us believing only to find we are screwed in the end
So true ..... illusion often has a shred of truth, just enough to trick others!!
I love this! The 3rd is wonderful! :-)
illusion can be so much... we truly can fool ourselves and on the other hand it can protect us at times..nice..
Powerful - first phrase repetition and the insightful explication of a meaning set in apposition to the phrase - creating understanding through tension. Very successful sentences!
Interesting approach resulting in very meaningful thought provoking sentences ...
Illusion can definitely be deceiving. Well done on these.
I specially like the first one ~ Cool use of googlism as well, its addicting, isn't it ~
Very interesting your approach on illusions and freedom! Exquisite haikus!
Each of your sentences strikes as very carefully observed! My favorite is #3.
powerful!! loved the way you have explored this
So well done!! The middle one is especially powerful.
Thank you, friends! Glad we all're having fun! Thanks to Gay and Mrsupole!
Cleverly done and how sadly true the third.Anna :o]
Very nicely done.
Love how you've pulled this together, really liked the first one, beautifully done!
illusions can be misleading but, then again they are illusions..very well done..
How true........................life's too an illusion
i played with illusion as well.. loved the last one especially
Illusion.... a shred of the truth.. How reflective.. Thank you for the poem..