Thursday, November 14, 2013

Illusion

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Illusion is first
the pleasures tend to fool us
near a horizon

Illusion – technique
to materialize the
emptiness; a death

Illusion – freedom,
ultimate weapon in use,
a shred of the truth.



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21 comments:

  1. nice...each of these is like a facet of our illusions...def when attached to a grain of truth they can be deadly...think i like hte middle one best..

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  2. illusions can sure leave us believing only to find we are screwed in the end

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  3. So true ..... illusion often has a shred of truth, just enough to trick others!!

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  4. I love this! The 3rd is wonderful! :-)

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  5. illusion can be so much... we truly can fool ourselves and on the other hand it can protect us at times..nice..

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  6. Powerful - first phrase repetition and the insightful explication of a meaning set in apposition to the phrase - creating understanding through tension. Very successful sentences!

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  7. Interesting approach resulting in very meaningful thought provoking sentences ...

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  8. Illusion can definitely be deceiving. Well done on these.

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  9. I specially like the first one ~ Cool use of googlism as well, its addicting, isn't it ~

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  10. Very interesting your approach on illusions and freedom! Exquisite haikus!

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  11. Each of your sentences strikes as very carefully observed! My favorite is #3.

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  12. powerful!! loved the way you have explored this

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  13. So well done!! The middle one is especially powerful.

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  14. Thank you, friends! Glad we all're having fun! Thanks to Gay and Mrsupole!

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  15. Cleverly done and how sadly true the third.
    Anna :o]

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  16. Love how you've pulled this together, really liked the first one, beautifully done!

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  17. illusions can be misleading but, then again they are illusions..very well done..

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  18. How true........................life's too an illusion

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  19. i played with illusion as well.. loved the last one especially

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  20. Illusion.... a shred of the truth.. How reflective.. Thank you for the poem..

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