Sunday, October 27, 2013

Le Jardin


Ernst Max 'Le Jardin' 1962


Heading to right
She floats in flatness of tunnel
Solo
Savoring while on the path.

Nothing she knows,
As a stream intended to turn
Left
Breaking the pod in a gust.


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11 comments:

  1. Enjoyed following the pod on the journey...

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  2. Freshly ingenious; well written...

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  3. we really know not what this life has in store for us...
    when the river may turn and our pod will pop...
    intriguing last stanza there...

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  4. Exquisite poem! This is the tunnel ...

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  5. She certainly seems ready..go straight for it, girl!!

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  6. Mixing together these elements has catalysed action......thanks Hum'

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  7. very cool unity of pic and words...

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  8. I enjoyed the way your words made me follow all the lines of the image. I was swaying with word and curves...

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