Saturday, August 10, 2013

Split, we travel...(palindromes)


‘when it comes to the moon,
darkness often means light’
Tarot
Night out
we’re liquids
in various stages
travel to exchange
the electrolytes
of souls
split
through  ages
to highlight
the darkness
of moon
 ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
 moon of
darkness, the
highlight to
ages through
split
souls of
electrolytes-
exchange to travel
stages
various in liquids
Are we out,
night?



 now-
the best chance
to heal
 old wounds
face the fears
repair the path…
~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
…path of  repair
fears – on the face
wounds – old
heal – for chance
the best - now


Image credit: marvel.com

Sunday Mini-challenge: Palindromes ( mirrored poetry)
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28 comments:

  1. Brian MillerAugust 10, 2013 at 7:17 PM

    ah i like the second one best...its concise and carries great meaning for me...the pic is from a comic book as well..just cant think of which one...

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    1. grapelingAugust 11, 2013 at 2:09 AM

      Thanos? Gemstones

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    2. Brian MillerAugust 11, 2013 at 8:31 AM

      yep, exactly mike....

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    3. humbirdAugust 11, 2013 at 9:00 AM

      yes, indeed, marvel.com about comics too, I've chosen the pic because felt it right for my poem...the image credit - on the bottom

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  2. FeathersAugust 10, 2013 at 7:46 PM

    so beautiful...and truthful...

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  3. HannahAugust 10, 2013 at 8:02 PM

    So many layers of meaning taken on and in your first I feel a certain quality of unity that carried through mine which is cool as well. Great writing and thank you for your visit!

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    1. humbirdAugust 10, 2013 at 8:18 PM

      Wonderful! Thank you Hannah for this Uni-verse connection :) Much Love!

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  4. Pat HattAugust 10, 2013 at 8:17 PM

    Second sure rings true, but healing can take a long arse time

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    1. humbirdAugust 10, 2013 at 8:20 PM

      ...for everyone- different, but together - we heal the planet!
      thanks :)

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  5. Gemma WisemanAugust 10, 2013 at 8:29 PM

    Love the image of being liquids that could connect, but we meander, we gush, we split at deltas and we dry up. Healing can be a process without any known template other than time.

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    1. humbirdAugust 10, 2013 at 8:46 PM

      Thanks Gemma, like your contin. of my thoughts...and this time frame might be dissolved...

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  6. GraceAugust 10, 2013 at 8:38 PM

    I like mystical write on moon of darkness ~ The second one is particularly sharp for me, healing of old wounds ~ This form is really tricky, isn't it ~

    Thank you for participating in Sunday's Challenge ~

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  7. grapelingAugust 11, 2013 at 2:11 AM

    I also like the second one. Such a challenge Grace posed...

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    1. humbirdAugust 11, 2013 at 7:17 AM

      Yeah, very interesting form...thanks for visit! :)

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  8. brudbergAugust 11, 2013 at 6:36 AM

    Oh that second one is layered with so many meanings, it changes every time I read it...

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    1. humbirdAugust 11, 2013 at 7:20 AM

      Thanks Bjorn for taking time to read and to visit! :)

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  9. Kerry O'ConnorAugust 11, 2013 at 7:39 AM

    Wow! Electrolytes of soul.. what a wonderful idea you have incorporated into poetry, and the second half of the palindrome brings about a whole new meaning. Well done.

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  10. humbirdAugust 11, 2013 at 8:03 AM

    Thank you, Kerry! :)

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  11. WolfsrosebudAugust 11, 2013 at 8:50 AM

    repairing is a hard thing... great wisdom here

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  12. UnknownAugust 11, 2013 at 12:09 PM

    amazing...I feel as if I have traveled to a wonderful galaxy.
    the path of repair verse has touched my heart.

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  13. Sherry Blue SkyAugust 11, 2013 at 7:36 PM

    This is very clever........loved it.

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  14. Susie ClevengerAugust 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM

    Both are amazingly inspired, but I love the second one!

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  15. Kay L. DaviesAugust 12, 2013 at 1:04 AM

    I couldn't decide which I liked best. They both have great appeal, but the thought of healing old wounds, something in which I firmly believe, is irresistible.
    Well done.
    K

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  16. ed pilollaAugust 12, 2013 at 10:21 PM

    this form seems like quite a challenge. i like what you did a lot. various and liquids was a slippery image twice.

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  17. ClaudiaAugust 13, 2013 at 1:05 PM

    ilike the images in this...souls of
    electrolytes... the fluency and the movement it has...beautiful

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