Saturday, August 10, 2013

Split, we travel...(palindromes)


‘when it comes to the moon,
darkness often means light’
Tarot
Night out
we’re liquids
in various stages
travel to exchange
the electrolytes
of souls
split
through  ages
to highlight
the darkness
of moon
 ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
 moon of
darkness, the
highlight to
ages through
split
souls of
electrolytes-
exchange to travel
stages
various in liquids
Are we out,
night?



 now-
the best chance
to heal
 old wounds
face the fears
repair the path…
~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
…path of  repair
fears – on the face
wounds – old
heal – for chance
the best - now


Image credit: marvel.com

29 comments:

  1. ah i like the second one best...its concise and carries great meaning for me...the pic is from a comic book as well..just cant think of which one...

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    1. yes, indeed, marvel.com about comics too, I've chosen the pic because felt it right for my poem...the image credit - on the bottom

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  2. so beautiful...and truthful...

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  3. So many layers of meaning taken on and in your first I feel a certain quality of unity that carried through mine which is cool as well. Great writing and thank you for your visit!

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    1. Wonderful! Thank you Hannah for this Uni-verse connection :) Much Love!

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  4. Second sure rings true, but healing can take a long arse time

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    1. ...for everyone- different, but together - we heal the planet!
      thanks :)

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  5. Love the image of being liquids that could connect, but we meander, we gush, we split at deltas and we dry up. Healing can be a process without any known template other than time.

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    1. Thanks Gemma, like your contin. of my thoughts...and this time frame might be dissolved...

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  6. I like mystical write on moon of darkness ~ The second one is particularly sharp for me, healing of old wounds ~ This form is really tricky, isn't it ~

    Thank you for participating in Sunday's Challenge ~

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    1. Love this challenge, Grace! Thanks! :)

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  7. I also like the second one. Such a challenge Grace posed...

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    1. Yeah, very interesting form...thanks for visit! :)

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  8. Oh that second one is layered with so many meanings, it changes every time I read it...

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    1. Thanks Bjorn for taking time to read and to visit! :)

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  9. Wow! Electrolytes of soul.. what a wonderful idea you have incorporated into poetry, and the second half of the palindrome brings about a whole new meaning. Well done.

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  10. repairing is a hard thing... great wisdom here

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    1. Thank you for reading and the comment!

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  11. amazing...I feel as if I have traveled to a wonderful galaxy.
    the path of repair verse has touched my heart.

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  12. Path of repair ... yes, it takes time to heal old wounds, it's a journey. Well done! :)

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  13. This is very clever........loved it.

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  14. Both are amazingly inspired, but I love the second one!

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  15. I couldn't decide which I liked best. They both have great appeal, but the thought of healing old wounds, something in which I firmly believe, is irresistible.
    Well done.
    K

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  16. this form seems like quite a challenge. i like what you did a lot. various and liquids was a slippery image twice.

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  17. ilike the images in this...souls of
    electrolytes... the fluency and the movement it has...beautiful

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