Sunday, September 1, 2013

Feathers of thoughts


Close to scarlet sunset
feathers of thoughts
silhouette
swaying on oiled surface
(whether they copied or paced)
marks inky stars
shooting and lost
into wet hole
of doubt…


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 Sunday Whirl

8 comments:

  1. Down that hole one can go, lost it can seem if too low

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  2. That hole reads to me a kind of whatever of Alice adventure

    Much love...

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  3. Sunset is a great time for your mind to take you on adventures.

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  4. I like this I like shooting and lost into wet holes of doubt. Doubt is such a slippery slope.

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  5. I like what you did with the words!

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  6. Great use of the words! I especially like the "wet hole of doubt..."

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  7. Nicely penned. That hole of doubt is a hard one to dig oneself out of!!

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  8. So nice and so concise.

    Pamela
    I am making my rounds very late, sorry.

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