Sunday, September 1, 2013

Feathers of thoughts


Close to scarlet sunset
feathers of thoughts
silhouette
swaying on oiled surface
(whether they copied or paced)
marks inky stars
shooting and lost
into wet hole
of doubt…
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8 comments:

  1. Pat HattSeptember 1, 2013 at 6:29 PM

    Down that hole one can go, lost it can seem if too low

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  2. Gillena CoxSeptember 1, 2013 at 8:40 PM

    That hole reads to me a kind of whatever of Alice adventure

    Much love...

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  3. Old EggSeptember 2, 2013 at 7:11 PM

    Sunset is a great time for your mind to take you on adventures.

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  4. aspiritofsimplicitySeptember 2, 2013 at 9:31 PM

    I like this I like shooting and lost into wet holes of doubt. Doubt is such a slippery slope.

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  5. annell4September 3, 2013 at 7:57 AM

    I like what you did with the words!

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  6. daphnepurpusSeptember 3, 2013 at 8:12 PM

    Great use of the words! I especially like the "wet hole of doubt..."

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  7. MarySeptember 4, 2013 at 6:58 AM

    Nicely penned. That hole of doubt is a hard one to dig oneself out of!!

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  8. flaubertSeptember 7, 2013 at 9:30 PM

    So nice and so concise.

    Pamela
    I am making my rounds very late, sorry.

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