Tuesday, September 26, 2017

at the courtyard

Courtyard blues


at the courtyard
curly creepers keep track
the stories

hastily tapping heels,
creak of loosely closed door
to the barn…



Read more at CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, CD Imagination, courtyard blues

8 comments:

  1. I especially love the focus on sound in the second haiku

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  2. luv the ear of the vines in the first haiku

    much love...

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  3. Yes! The details in this poem make it come alive with all kinds of possibilities. Lovely!

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  4. Thank you, friends! Appreciate your comments!

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  5. Bravo, I like where your poem took us, not what I was expecting!

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