The sunbeam: at the courtyard

Tuesday, September 26, 2017

at the courtyard

Courtyard blues

at the courtyard

curly creepers keep track

the stories

hastily tapping heels,

creak of loosely closed door

to the barn…

Read more at CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI, CD Imagination, courtyard blues

7 comments:

brudbergSeptember 27, 2017 at 2:36 AM
I especially love the focus on sound in the second haiku
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Pat HattSeptember 27, 2017 at 6:00 AM
Curl up a tale without fail
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Gillena CoxSeptember 27, 2017 at 10:49 AM
luv the ear of the vines in the first haiku

much love...

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ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 27, 2017 at 3:28 PM
A beautiful set.
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humbirdSeptember 27, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, friends! Appreciate your comments!
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21 WitsOctober 1, 2017 at 11:02 AM
Bravo, I like where your poem took us, not what I was expecting!
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purplepeninportland.comOctober 2, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Love that second one!
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