Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Unthawed

Dawn…
Showing your raising path.
Rays…
Stretching to greet the flocks.
Snow…
Melting absorbed the fears.
Heart…
Thaw releasing tears.

6 comments:

  1. I like the subtlety in which the pain is conveyed in your poem, humbird

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  2. It is wonderful when at last the thaw happens!

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  3. The heart works in the most of mysterious ways.

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  4. And the grass shows no more snow causing woes

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  5. the various stages of snow in lour life, beautiful!

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  6. that thaw is a good thing...the heart thawing allows things to enter in again...

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