Saturday, February 15, 2014

Taboo

flickr.com by greekadman

I feel as in blurry taboo,
Uncertainty’s edges perplex,
By softening facets false/true
You left, least expecting the cracks…

painting with pastels by me

I dream of significant move,
I feel as in blurry taboo,
Say, what if my step - not approved
Would I find the spot for my shoe...

flickr.com by hindrik

My thoughts rest against a sky brew
Impatient as horses hoof knock,
I feel as in blurry taboo
With no one to wish me ‘good luck’…

flickr.com by nickwheeleroz

My glass – always whole, never half
Inside – many points of view,
Say, why in the world should I draft…
I feel as in blurry taboo.


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17 comments:

  1. Hopefully your thoughts don't hurt like a horse stomp as they run about haha and the blurry taboo can be fun for writing at ones zoo

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  2. looking at the glass whole defeats the whole half full or half empty argument....
    also not bad to see many points of view...
    happy weekend to you as well.
    smiles.

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  3. Wow! You amalgamated form, pictures and words into an amazing visual experience.

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  4. oh i like your pastel painting - and looking at things from different angles is certainly a good thing

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  5. wonderful how you saw it and presented it from so many points of view.. like a focused kaleidoscopic view---

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  6. Love the different points of view.

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  7. Enjoyed.. Related to this, especially this morning.. Thanks

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  8. Good work on the flurry of thoughts on the different images ~ Happy Sunday ~

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  9. Whew. I feel a little blurry now, but loved every minute of it, knowing I will recover enriched.

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  10. very nice....I feel a bit blurry this morning also

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  11. Thank you, HumB. Now I have an idea of what a blurry taboo might be, a spinning wreck.
    ..

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  12. wow, a response to each image- well done ~

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  13. Life is about chances - the future often blurry for us all. Nicely done.

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