Friday, February 21, 2014

The fog

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I has erected
the pyramid
of 3 words.

Under the roof
of LOVE
I felt cozy and safe.

Thru the windows
of my spinning world
I saw YOU.

The warmth passed
thru the chimney
filtered I.


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15 comments:

  1. That is creative and super clever....a great take on the prompt and a killer imagination to boot. I think the title fits, very appropriately to the style of writing. Great work and thanks for participating, I always appreciate reading your words!

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    1. Thank you for the prompt, H. Appreciate your words :)

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  2. I love that the reader must construct this sentence.

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  3. The three words that can mean much

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  4. Thank you, friends for kind comments! Much Love! <3

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  5. i like the i love you hidden in this...
    when a house is a pyramid of i love yous i think it a good thing...
    smiles.

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  6. I think you have found the BEST words of all!

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  7. I too love how you did this! Very creative

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  8. I must add my kudos for how clever this is...great job!!

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