Sunday, February 23, 2014

Trial

Poet's Sleep, 1989, by Chang Houg Ahn 


“Truth is one, paths are many.”

The egg-headed’ project
to add enzymes to test
the strength of scalp
brought many pebbles
from forcefully hatched mugs
into my open willfully window.

Modern shell/trust form
has stuck tightly
with a Light course,
blew away not so ‘high’
peep’s pokes.

Should be the sovereignty of one
worthy of the interests of many...
Truth is one...

a baker's dozen by Brenda Warren


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13 comments:

  1. You used the wordle words very effectively.

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  2. Great take on these two prompts!

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  3. Peeps from an egghead you say, hmmm that could lead one astray

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  4. "Worthy the interests of many." Accurate description of your lines...

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  5. And all the kings horses and allmthe kings men have conspired to piece Mohandis together again !
    Good on you Hum, this is awesome ....l

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  6. You combined two prompts so well. Great write.

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  7. well done- especially the last verse.

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  8. You are a master of crafting these words into one, delightful read.

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  9. The prompts have been combined beautifully. The egghead may need more enzymes.

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  10. There is a jagged kind of peace in this..just like in the painting

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  11. Love it...he does have an egg head!

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  12. I like how you used the wordle words to describe the picture in the first stanza! Now I see his egg head!

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  13. I feel as though you took me into your/his dream.

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