Sunday, June 1, 2014

Launch

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No horoscope
Card reading
Enough
I feel
my path
emerging
s l o w l y
through
rainy
pass
erasing
all errors
from past

I shift outside
after rain
the scent
propels
all previous
starts

A terrain
is paved
with countless
fields
open for
jovial
sturdy
feet

I chase
the vibrant
fluids
of air

The sky
leans
toward
me.

                 Brenda Warren


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8 comments:

  1. As well as launching on a path..this has a sense of listening and following it..when things feel right that's a good course..I love the rain..and leaning into the sky..

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  2. You have your character finally discovering herself. I like that the limitless sky "leans toward me" showing that all is possible.

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  3. One needs to strike out on their own way, no need for others to point and say

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  4. Interesting read. Ah teh scent of rain, it is magical at times

    http://thequietone.net/2014/06/01/june-1st-poem/

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  5. I feel so refreshed after reading this:)

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  6. Tracing fluids could prove to be an exercise in futility...

    June’s First Wordle

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    1. Tracing feels like even more productive/creative than chasing...Thanks, Teacher!

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