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They are like porcelain, aligned
same pose, expressions, a wave of hand
with lyre one in a graceful stand
another sits in Yoga style.
Their eyes drink sun shine from the sky
the will of fortune keeps off split
above adversity, woes’ pit
in meditation spirits fly…
Ascending to the cliff sign R.I.P.
the wind drilled/whispered in the air
a wish for a habit ‘do not fear’
trust 6th sense, let the
heart to flit.
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| by Brenda Warren |
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the image and lines complement each other...and i like the wish too.... :)
ReplyDeleteTrusting your senses.. Yes that's important - the 6th sense, the instinct.. So important.
ReplyDeleteHuh, the 6th sense somehow saved many from some trying moments. One got to trust oneself and nobody else! Great write humbird!
ReplyDeleteHank
Let the heart flit, I like that ending ~ Such a unique take on the porcelain figurings ~
ReplyDeleteVery unusual poem with so many cool lines. I especially like the eyes drinking in the sunshine. Thanks. K.
ReplyDeleteHave to be aware at your lair and trust your gut
ReplyDeleteLove the art and your words.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your piece.
ReplyDeleteNice use of words and images.
ReplyDeleteI'm for trusting our 6th sense, too.
ReplyDeleteIf I trusted my sixth sense more often, I'd probably be in better shape!
ReplyDelete:) yoga style!! i like that!! its really nice!
ReplyDeleteI always try to trust the 6th sense. Great job!
ReplyDeleteSo well done. I'm for trusting 6th sense too.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
nice last line on letting the heart flit....
ReplyDeleteand we def have to trust our own senses....
Trusting self is one of the hardest task we must learn to do and yet it is essential for finding a fulfilling life. Wise write,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
I certainly go along with the heart flitting! I know no better occupation in life.
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting description of the porcelain statuettes, with many pensive thoughts well explored. However, I am not getting a sense of an octave from these three quatrain, though the envelope rhyme works very well.
ReplyDeleteIs this good thing? Thank you very much, Kerry!
DeleteWishes are all about flying..daring to chip the porcelain facade a little...a fine poem humbird
ReplyDeleteI like, particularly
ReplyDelete. . . . in meditation spirits fly…
and it is linked to the nysterious 6th sense:
I'm sure you would agree
The importance of ESP
And always throughout history
It has been reveared in mystery
Signed up as you follower.
Thank you so much for blessing my blog with you graceful presence
and yout thoughtful and kind comments :) Eddie xx
especially admire the first stanza ~
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