Unfolding creativity, changing life
i like that first stanza...personally i love the train...and the thought of present and past folding together...
As I reflect on your poem the thought that comes to my mind is that eventually we all are out of time. Thus we MUST do what we can with the time we have.
Killer closing. Enjoyed.
Love "present the past folded in an hour"......it all goes as fast as a speeding train. Ack!
Time can fly by, back to 1985 we all can't go haha
Oh wow the pace of the poem definitely conveys the sense of urgency, fantastic job