||: foreign
thoughts
jumped in my
brain –
refrain :||
A headache,
right hemisphere pain.
Oy, -
touching the head, -
this is not
my “bread and butter”,
who is a narrator?...
Thoughts
slates move
from left to
right,
soft spots
fingertips rotate
to fit in the
whirl mesh
to open the
attic,
to dissolve
and smash
what is negative…
temple to
temple,
connect the
dots
- First line –
Third eye-
between brows,
reach
opposite side –
connect for
- Second line –
Control room,
driven in no time-
I’m inside
sitting behind
my eyes as open
windows
on an intersection
of lines.
Create a red
rose…open…discharge
the pain,
disembodied voices…
breathe
in-out…
Solution (for
this time) – found.
Image credit: nationalgeographic.com
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Cool scifi bent to this prompt.
ReplyDeleteHumbird, I think what I read in your poem is the effects of a very painful headache. May it come to an end soon.
ReplyDeleteSmiles, Mary, I'm healed...Thanks.
Deletehaha ouch to such a pain, hope it goes far away and boards a train
ReplyDeleteLove the Eye of God photo and the way cool planetary update.......the poem was great between the two - especially - "dissolve and smash what is negative"......
ReplyDeletei do love a good head massage when i get a headache...the temples, the bridge of the nose, the cheeks, the third eye...glad you found some relief there in the end...
ReplyDeleteBoth headache and astronomy work here, depending on perspective. Pretty cool.
ReplyDeleteAah. I hope you are cured of your headache. Because the ending looks a bit calm. :)
ReplyDeleteStrong write, I like your formatting...glad your headache dissipated.
ReplyDeleteyou really captured the intensity and disorientation of a headache! Wow I am so glad you are feeling better =)
ReplyDeleteSometimes in pain we travel to places we would never see without it...thank goodness when the pains clears we can return to peace.
ReplyDeleteWow, this was powerful and profound~
ReplyDeleteWell done
nice...a good head massage can work wonders .. glad you found some relieve in the end
ReplyDeletebeen a couple days...hope all is well....
ReplyDeleteThinking loud of the pain. Glad that you are relieved now!
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