Sunday, July 14, 2013

New opus


...spontaneously leave
the phase of stillness,
where sick lab’s
circulating in a caldron
with wicked tests from
arteries and veins,
in colorful tubes,
verifying mistakes
by catalyst conscience,
streamed into  opus,
translated to  language
of dreams…

new friends arrive
at the same time
to rest –
sent no note, no links -
together-ness…
just a second
before
alarm
rings…


Image credit: abstract.desktopnexus.com

The poem inspired by Sunday Whirl,
 Poets United
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29 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 14, 2013 at 3:38 PM

    I really like this. Especially your ending.

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  2. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJuly 14, 2013 at 4:20 PM

    Really liked this as well---loved the vision your words conjured!!

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    1. humbirdJuly 15, 2013 at 7:04 AM

      thank you for walking with me thru, Audrey. Nice to meet you!

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  3. Brian MillerJuly 14, 2013 at 4:53 PM

    well that is some dream...at least you got a moment of community before waking up to reality..smiles.

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    1. humbirdJuly 15, 2013 at 7:03 AM

      haha, right...maybe this is what I need...hint from the dream...ths, Brian :)

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  4. MaryJuly 14, 2013 at 5:03 PM

    This sounds a little frightening really with a caldron of wicked tests and at the end an alarm ringing. I hope you are okay!!

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    1. humbirdJuly 15, 2013 at 7:01 AM

      O,yes, Mary,I'm very well. Thanks for being with me in it...:)

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  5. LaTonya BaldwinJuly 14, 2013 at 6:23 PM

    well done with the prompt.

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  6. Walt WojtanikJuly 14, 2013 at 6:31 PM

    Always a second before the alarm rings! Just how it is. Brilliant.

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  7. Pat HattJuly 14, 2013 at 7:25 PM

    Leave all of that festering in the pot, so the brain doesn't rot

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    1. humbirdJuly 15, 2013 at 6:57 AM

      Some verbiage - like muscles' stretch...
      bow for the comment flow.

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  8. AnonymousJuly 14, 2013 at 7:45 PM

    I love the alarm's implication.

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 14, 2013 at 9:09 PM

    I would like the after-story...you know, after the alarm rings.

    In This World of Lies

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    1. humbirdJuly 15, 2013 at 6:45 AM

      ha, ths for the idea... wow...nice to meet you, MMT!

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  10. Old EggJuly 14, 2013 at 9:13 PM

    Reality is a poor substitute for dreams.

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    1. humbirdJuly 15, 2013 at 6:43 AM

      sometimes we can get some ideas from dreams though...Glad you read my poem, gratitude, oldegg.

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 14, 2013 at 10:35 PM

    Yoiks. From the comments I gather this was a dream, and am glad for you that that's the case! Imbued with atmosphere!

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  12. UnknownJuly 15, 2013 at 6:18 AM

    Darn that alarm! Gets you every time!

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  13. GraceJuly 15, 2013 at 2:17 PM

    I like that language of dreams ~

    Smiles from BC ~

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    1. humbirdJuly 16, 2013 at 6:58 AM

      Thank you, Grace! Love Canada...been at Quebec...:)

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  14. NankaJuly 16, 2013 at 5:14 AM

    I was there just then ;) the alarm rings!! Then the slow crawl starts, it is not like jumping out of the bed for me!! :)

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    1. humbirdJuly 16, 2013 at 7:03 AM

      Yeah...need to write about...thanks, Nanka. Nice to meet you. Impressed by your bio, following dreams...:)x

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  15. gautami tripathyJuly 20, 2013 at 10:44 AM

    Excellent write...

    Love the ending....

    in the shadows, let it be

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