Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Fantasy


I woke up
in your body...

Up to dawn
my soul 
searched
for the shelter...
by the sea
on the
sunny side
of the moon...

Body mine,
toned well,
looked
for the
spiritual
brother...

Golden lock
we discovered
soon.

Image credit: wallpaperdev.com

14 comments:

  1. I specially like that second stanza ~ Lovely share ~

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  2. interesting on the body swapping going on...the golden lock is an interesting element as well...this feels different than your other pieces...

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  3. A great weave, as ones body they leave

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  4. Somewhere in the cast of cards hearts beat together, the chorus singing... rhapsody all the more real though blue passion red in the hold all we need to see to bet or divine, search the necklaces of worlds atomized we string as pearls... in the mood or balance the rays of words slip thru like electric shadows shot from the colder or hotter sun our four wings in eagle flight entangled and entwined against the free fall that there can be no dark side of our home star, the sun...

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  5. Lost the reply... I will remember it in this poem one day.

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  6. I love the "sunny side of the moon" - and the searching......beautiful!

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  7. the sunny side of the moon always a safe harbor
    a beautiful fanciful piece

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  8. This is breathtaking. The picture, and every word after.

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  9. interesting to wake in another's body...and how we look at the world differently then

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  10. I too love the sunny side of the moon~
    I love your clever take on the prompt-
    and the golden lock
    ;D

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  11. What a beautiful 'experience' you have captured in your words.

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