Unfolding creativity, changing life
Oh! If only all of us could take that leap to tranquility in more than our dreams and more than our churches. If only we took others with us. I love the hands and the palms--outside trees and the giving part of the hand.
Wonderful theme! Thank you for comment!
Wow. Very succinct, but there is a lot in there to pry apart.
Ah. They are so good. I really liked the middle one: "tranquil palms in our eyes/keeping balance".-HA
Dream and take that leap, never know how far one can get
Wow! Beautifully written :D :D
Nothing more tranquil than palms waving in the breeze.
I truly like the last one best. All three are exceptional but the last one...wow.
It is amazing how palm trees do make one feel tranquil. Not sure why that is.
Beautifully written. Loved it :)
Nothing is impossible when dreaming...even I might leap again!
Love the palms and quantum leap...great write!
Like that second thought..the palm trees keeping the balance...visually and in our minds...
Interesting form I am not familiar with. Thanks for sharing this. Well penned. And thank you for commenting on my poem as well.
A nice treat this post Humbird, three wonderful haiku. Your second is my favorite. You have used leap linking in a very nice way ...
Thank you, Kristjaan! Much appreciate your words! I keep learning....
I especially like the traquil palms.
The opening line offers such possibility for exploration which you have shown here...quantum leaps of imagination certainly lighten the step
Thank you for comments, my friends! Much Love!
Serenity! Love these!
Lovely, it reads like a song!
There's a lot in these few lines ~ takes a few re-reads. Beautiful imagery.
short and sweet love it. thanks for your comment on mine Humbird. :D
a lovely interpretation of the theme ... lots to ponder on here - Bastet
An inventive take on the prompt. I found the laconic nature of the form and your careful choice of words made me stop, think and become tranquil as I searched for layers of meaning!