tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post6436803815769158657..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: Lighten stephumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-53764169571061518982015-11-10T23:21:36.158-06:002015-11-10T23:21:36.158-06:00An inventive take on the prompt. I found the lacon...An inventive take on the prompt. I found the laconic nature of the form and your careful choice of words made me stop, think and become tranquil as I searched for layers of meaning!Intellibloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04262938291462934103noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-75908477073284645882015-11-06T05:37:00.898-06:002015-11-06T05:37:00.898-06:00Amazing set!Amazing set!Reading Pleasurehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09734309378339910498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-64331131267543462672015-11-05T23:22:22.973-06:002015-11-05T23:22:22.973-06:00a lovely interpretation of the theme ... lots to p...a lovely interpretation of the theme ... lots to ponder on here - BastetAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-70415470333408049602015-11-05T20:47:43.856-06:002015-11-05T20:47:43.856-06:00short and sweet love it. thanks for your comment...short and sweet love it. thanks for your comment on mine Humbird. :DNicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-79625008103474207142015-11-05T14:07:28.072-06:002015-11-05T14:07:28.072-06:00There's a lot in these few lines ~ takes a few...There's a lot in these few lines ~ takes a few re-reads. Beautiful imagery.claireylovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691439928758477628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-72711516621786235012015-11-05T11:34:59.836-06:002015-11-05T11:34:59.836-06:00Lovely, it reads like a song!Lovely, it reads like a song!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-74912062285223238272015-11-05T09:10:03.573-06:002015-11-05T09:10:03.573-06:00Serenity! Love these!Serenity! Love these!Carol Campbellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09366366047409134966noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-57366791826987659622015-11-05T07:36:17.766-06:002015-11-05T07:36:17.766-06:00Wonderful theme! Thank you for comment!Wonderful theme! Thank you for comment!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-84613551866763448782015-11-05T07:35:11.480-06:002015-11-05T07:35:11.480-06:00Thank you for comments, my friends! Much Love!Thank you for comments, my friends! Much Love!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-21967719723630589752015-11-05T07:34:03.245-06:002015-11-05T07:34:03.245-06:00Thank you, Kristjaan! Much appreciate your words! ...Thank you, Kristjaan! Much appreciate your words! I keep learning....humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-45325823456473099492015-11-05T07:24:44.738-06:002015-11-05T07:24:44.738-06:00The opening line offers such possibility for explo...The opening line offers such possibility for exploration which you have shown here...quantum leaps of imagination certainly lighten the stepJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-5774824714391478662015-11-04T22:13:58.826-06:002015-11-04T22:13:58.826-06:00I especially like the traquil palms.I especially like the traquil palms.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-2809818126718123592015-11-04T22:03:54.739-06:002015-11-04T22:03:54.739-06:00A nice treat this post Humbird, three wonderful ha...A nice treat this post Humbird, three wonderful haiku. Your second is my favorite. You have used leap linking in a very nice way ...Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-75306938069903766372015-11-04T21:36:31.163-06:002015-11-04T21:36:31.163-06:00Interesting form I am not familiar with. Thanks fo...Interesting form I am not familiar with. Thanks for sharing this. Well penned. And thank you for commenting on my poem as well.Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-24452586075231524912015-11-04T19:48:02.435-06:002015-11-04T19:48:02.435-06:00Like that second thought..the palm trees keeping t...Like that second thought..the palm trees keeping the balance...visually and in our minds...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-34945190685929253772015-11-04T18:58:08.960-06:002015-11-04T18:58:08.960-06:00Love the palms and quantum leap...great write!Love the palms and quantum leap...great write!Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-57993392266058407372015-11-04T18:50:19.129-06:002015-11-04T18:50:19.129-06:00Nothing is impossible when dreaming...even I might...Nothing is impossible when dreaming...even I might leap again!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-53077786074614698492015-11-04T14:59:58.409-06:002015-11-04T14:59:58.409-06:00Beautifully written. Loved it :)Beautifully written. Loved it :)Purba chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10726789340791239305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-78315481357532448252015-11-04T14:58:39.700-06:002015-11-04T14:58:39.700-06:00It is amazing how palm trees do make one feel tran...It is amazing how palm trees do make one feel tranquil. Not sure why that is.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-35560578164983308642015-11-04T14:43:19.850-06:002015-11-04T14:43:19.850-06:00I truly like the last one best. All three are exc...I truly like the last one best. All three are exceptional but the last one...wow.tonispencerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04200564195675794747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-67435844578992523522015-11-04T14:18:14.879-06:002015-11-04T14:18:14.879-06:00Nothing more tranquil than palms waving in the bre...Nothing more tranquil than palms waving in the breeze.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-20332111459538661252015-11-04T14:01:00.145-06:002015-11-04T14:01:00.145-06:00Wow! Beautifully written :D :DWow! Beautifully written :D :DSanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-11811350172762203422015-11-04T13:49:29.377-06:002015-11-04T13:49:29.377-06:00Dream and take that leap, never know how far one c...Dream and take that leap, never know how far one can getPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-52138191968171107542015-11-04T13:48:51.095-06:002015-11-04T13:48:51.095-06:00Ah. They are so good. I really liked the middle on...Ah. They are so good. I really liked the middle one: "tranquil palms in our eyes/keeping balance".<br />-HAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-8614048335325890332015-11-04T13:26:16.585-06:002015-11-04T13:26:16.585-06:00Wow. Very succinct, but there is a lot in there to...Wow. Very succinct, but there is a lot in there to pry apart. Rob Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04982759910079119392noreply@blogger.com