Friday, November 13, 2015

Forever falling

etsy ~ Emily Newman Art


*
Transparent
become thinner and thinner
the falling leaves

**
go on
follow to the next page
I turn slowly

***
my calendar
keeps winter days under cover
age to treasure

****
new colors and shades
throughout each breath
my palette

*****
reversible
the hidden suppressed cells
meaning of life


Shared with PU Poetry Pantry

17 comments:

  1. Some beautiful images in your words today...I love the first one with the painting....the leaves are fading more and more now.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  2. Fading away as life fades out only to begin a new soon enough

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  3. Wonderful notes of this in between stage, falling into winter. Enjoyed.

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  4. Such a wonderful depiction of the season :D :D

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  5. I feel myself comforted when gently being darkly pulled into the fall like this.

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  6. I like looking at the new colors and new shades. Nature has such a majestic palette that she uses this time of year.

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  7. Each season writes its own poetry and expresses feelings in our minds. Beautifully written.

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  8. Wonderful, layered images ... beautifully woven.

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  9. Thank you so much, my friends!

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  10. it seems you can't wait for winter to end. :)
    love the progression of each haiku, as if from winter to the start of spring. lovely!

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  11. a cycle - everything's a cycle. crisp and lovely images. ah, winter is definitely coming soon. thanks for the read, humbird

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  12. Yes the pages get thinner as winter comes and they turn crisp as leaves..the key word in this wonderful poem is for me 'reversible'

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  13. Such a beautiful series of haiku - together they paint a picture.

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  14. Wonderful ... leaves proliferate throughout your poem, transparent, turning, undercover, in color--oh! how marvelous the belonging here!

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  15. A lovely depiction of Autumn ~ leaves are truly beautiful as they change color and fall.

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