Sunday, December 14, 2014

Endeavors

photograph by Robert Doisneau


Forever
spinning
my head
has been thru all
confusions
of life
simultaneously…

lunatic, my soul
space crafted
endeavor per endeavor
to spread the synergy
to save loser tangled
planets’ treads
so angels could safely 
return home in peace…


Sunday Whirl~ by Brenda Warren


Read more at: Sunday Whirl, Magpie Tales

22 comments:

  1. There is nothing worse and spinning head...problems and worries all swirled..untangling them and floating them away is the key to successful endeavours I am sure xo

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  2. Nice poem! :)


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  3. Nice use of the prompts & words :)

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  4. "...all
    confusions
    of life
    simultaneously…"

    I can barely breathe, so the speaker must be blue in the face. Such effectively overwhelming lines...

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  5. make my head spin also! Great poem and use of the image and words!

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  6. I am always supprised when I read those wordle poems...thank you for comming by

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  7. One gets to do all those if times are favorable! Nicely humbird!

    Hank

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  8. may be there are angels among people

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  9. Yes, one must always be aware...for there are indeed angels walking amongst us...this is brilliant.

    http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2014/12/come-they-close.html

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  10. That spinning feeling.. A confusion, coming to a conclusion.

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  11. When we think of the angels among us just imagine what the real ones are like!

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  12. Nicely done! I love the part about the angels returning home in peace!

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  13. It must be a challenge to incorporate 2 prompts.

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  14. Looks like they have just landed !

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  15. that's my favorite part of any kind of travel...the returning home in peace part

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  16. ah that sounds like a good thing to do...

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  17. Love's safety in a world of chaos...great job with the picture and word prompts!

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