Thursday, December 5, 2013

Globe-all style

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My mono style - the ignorance
as if no Ki to enter
a sanctuary,
an igloo,
or spin around equator…

What if I wrap meridians
across the parallels,
infused
through the nadis
into my body's cells…

with magnitude of love,
infinite and diverse
for Gaia  gift,
the better place,
where whole world converse.


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24 comments:

  1. Pat HattDecember 5, 2013 at 8:08 PM

    I all could converse would be better all around indeed

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  2. MaryDecember 5, 2013 at 8:26 PM

    With magnitude of love, the world would be a better place.

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  3. Isadora GruyeDecember 5, 2013 at 8:39 PM

    I love the balance of this piece. The concept folded into a neat two stanza philothrope. Awesome.

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  4. Brian MillerDecember 5, 2013 at 8:40 PM

    nice...its funny i was just teaching my son longitude and latitude tonight...so these words are fresh in my head already...love the second verse...and the mother earth gift, def would love a place we all converse...

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  5. MaryDecember 5, 2013 at 9:41 PM

    A beautiful intention to keep front & center ;-)

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  6. kaykualaDecember 5, 2013 at 9:57 PM

    Put them together and enjoy the fun of having all of them around. I can imagine how much fun can be had here! Nicely humbird!

    Hank

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  7. Vandana SharmaDecember 5, 2013 at 10:28 PM

    Like the way you have used the Hindi word " Nadi".,

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  8. Ron ShieldsDecember 5, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    the better place, where whole world converse...what a gift that would be.

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  9. ClaudiaDecember 5, 2013 at 11:00 PM

    What if I wrap meridians
    across the parallels.... how cool is that... and love def. makes the world a better place..

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  10. MargaretDecember 5, 2013 at 11:16 PM

    I enjoyed the same line as Claudia - and a fine ending.

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  11. UnknownDecember 5, 2013 at 11:57 PM

    really well balanced piece - full circle.

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  12. AnonymousDecember 5, 2013 at 11:58 PM

    a fine sentiment ~

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  13. brudbergDecember 6, 2013 at 2:16 AM

    Lovely and spiritual - that special structure you can only find through the flow of words

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  14. HelenDecember 6, 2013 at 9:48 AM

    Great write! Second stanza my favorite ... almost space age in feel.

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  15. SusanDecember 6, 2013 at 3:24 PM

    This is a what if worthy of experiment, over and over ...

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  16. Susie ClevengerDecember 6, 2013 at 6:17 PM

    Simply beautiful

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  17. AnonymousDecember 7, 2013 at 10:47 AM

    Oh! That would be such a beautiful thing to do. Bringing the whole world together and as a gift for Mother earth makes it even more lovely. :-)
    -HA

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  18. The SentinelDecember 7, 2013 at 1:25 PM

    I feel a rich sense of building here. Creation. Layering complexities on the simple to deepen the beauty. To deepen our reach into our foundations.

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  19. GraceDecember 7, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    I like Gaia's gift to the one beautiful world ~

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  20. SemaphoreDecember 7, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    I love how the circumferentiality of your words expand to hold the entire world...

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  21. humbirdDecember 8, 2013 at 5:59 AM

    Grateful for all comments! Peaceful Holidays to All!

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  22. HannahDecember 10, 2013 at 7:11 PM

    I love the word choices...interesting and Gaia's gift caught my attention as well. A beautiful write full of universal truths.

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