Monday, November 30, 2015

Tavan Bogd

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Tavan Bogd mountains
the noise - growing intense
on the border
listening to shaman drums
the neighbors dream of peace

                                                              
                                                           
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9 comments:

  1. Such peaceful dreams would be nice, unless the drumming is bad and peace and quiet is what is wanted lol

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  2. A faint mood of double meaning here. I would put tha tanka into present tense though. Well done.

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    1. Thank you! Timing noticed well....agree. My very best!

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  3. Such is life with Shaman neighbours. Cool poem!

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    1. Thank you so much, Kristjaan! Enjoyed the prompt!

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  5. Such a pleasant feeling throughout.

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