Wednesday, April 22, 2015

No pretense

Art by Bill L'Engle


Hush, desperate thoughts
Listen to beautiful beat
I walked down to earth
          Watch a new life’s hatching eggs
          Heart in the sync – no pretense


Read more at: PU Mid-Week Motif, Three Word Wednesday

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22 comments:

  1. There is great hope in the hatching! Yay!

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  2. This is so heart-warming... the entire feel of the poem... reflects the birth of a new world... pleading to be loved and cared for..!! Happy Earth Day :D
    xoxo

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  3. Fine response to the three word challenge...

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  4. Hatching can bring forth much, hatch a good plan

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  5. To me, this gives that sense of how walking down to earth and listening to the beautiful beat of nature can hush our most desperate thoughts. Lovely truth here.

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  6. Experiencing birth is certainly one way to quiet the desperate heart. ANd if the one who walks down to earth can manage to keep life growing with no pretense, that will be a welcome miracle.

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  7. Each spring seems like an opportunity for a new "hatching"
    I like the way you took the art and blended this poetry

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  8. Hopefully with the opportunity for new life and new generations, there may be something of this great world for them to appreciate and enjoy..The art image supports the hatching of new life, very well..

    Eileen

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  9. Something will survive and prosper in the mess we leave but it is unlikely to be us.

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  10. hatching of new life brings hope.

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  11. love this birth of hope...a moment of silent enjoyment & resolution...beautiful...

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  12. Aw those desperate thoughts… Enjoyed..

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  13. Yes, I often have to hush my desperate thoughts. I'll think of hatching eggs next time. Thanks for this.

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  14. that first word really gave a setting to the poem

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  15. No pretense, love the whole poem ~

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  16. I really liked the feel of your words... hopeful and thrilling both at once. There is a sense of wonder and beauty. And indeed, t'is no pretense. :-)
    -HA

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  17. How wonderful! This lovely poem reminds us that if we take the time to stop, listen, look and appreciate all of the amazing things in nature, we can only harmonise with them and be part of them...

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