Unfolding creativity, changing life
Beautiful!!! Loved the first half the most... I can feel the reverberation in my ribs.
Hopefully those ribs recover lol
Very good.. Can see all of this too, although probably was influenced by your words☺
Oh wow this is incredible! mindlovemisery
The vibration seems powerful in your body like the OM of a mantra and then increases...very poignant!
Yes, nice poem, with expressive force!
Compact with a punch. You captured the image. Applause.