Saturday, April 25, 2015

Cinquenta

~ B&P's Shadorma & Beyond ~

Playing sick

Weary,
my three eyes playing
musical chairs
two ways.

~ B&P's Shadorma & Beyond ~

Who says rats?

Grown big
he distinguish
white noise
from peppermint.

Cinquenta - 50 /portuguese, here - poetic form of 50 characters.

24 comments:

  1. This is a really creative take on the prompt! Thank goodness the puppy seems to be much better now :)

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  2. lol amazing how sick can turn around so fast

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  3. I think that peppermint has a a more subtle edge than white noise.

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  4. This was fun and the pictures were perfect.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  5. This was quite innovative.. :D
    Loved it!
    xoxo

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  6. we see strs all kind of stuff when not well ,but once fine all is well

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  7. White noise from peppermint - I enjoyed thinking about that! Pictures are great.

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  8. Very neat and effectively done - admirable clarity and wit here - I enjoyed.. Thank you With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  9. adorable photos. interesting form. at least there's a distinguishable line between white noise and peppermint

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  10. I like these short poems and how effectively they complement the illustrations!

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  11. It is always great to be surprised and amused by others poetic talents and get a laugh at the same time!

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  12. Bravo ... nicely done, I love them!

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  13. Great write I love the pictures used for inspiration.

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  14. Wonderful, love that first one

    mlm

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  15. Humbird,

    Loved this sick doggy tale. Rather cunning:)

    Eileen

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  16. Haha...thank goodness the fellow mellows down in the end😂

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