Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Struts

 Photo: Rob Neizen
Photo: Rob Neizen

1.    Path

Not choosing the path
at the beginning
naked, helpless,
we get tattooed
by culture
giving away
the power
until maturity time.

2.    Pores

I’ll come to my path
destination
through pores
humidity channels
wrapping
in ancient gaze
absorbed the fresh
crystal water.

3.    Fears

Still keep looking back
expecting a regular hint
from someone
who’d shoulder my burden…

Rely on thyself –
no windows
auditorium
where I’m feeling high

so powerful!
my world looks in me
to collect the stars…



4 comments:

  1. Interesting concept, the idea of the tattoos.. Never fully having our identity, and the line between our genes and environment being blurred.

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  2. that first one is so strong...in how we start naked and are tattooed by culture...so true...i like the world taking you in collecting stars...

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  3. Things start to take hold and change for better or worse comes to the fold

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  4. Abstract yet direct, like the image..

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