Saturday, April 19, 2014

Shades of rain

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The yel-low was yel-low
until the shades of rain
fell pat/pet-al of them

brrr…own

pestle, stamens, petals
leaves
twilight memory…


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13 comments:

  1. One by one they fall, creating something new

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  2. Yes, rain does have a way of pelting petals. Love it!

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  3. I'm already sick of the rain - it usually brings yellow flowers, but in the fall it does destroy them...

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  4. I love your ending-the offering of twilight-pretty!

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  5. gorgeous and love the word play...

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  6. an inventive take on the prompt ~

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  7. This read easily and still inspired so much imagery. Great write!

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  8. Enjoyed.. The way I think of spring.

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  9. ha. fun play in this...love the little jaunty rhym in the opening...and pat/petal...ha...nice...it will all go to brown eventually...when the season is done...

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  10. Love the colors you describe as well as the word play.

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  11. Love the sound play and color...nicely done!

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