Thursday, January 16, 2014

Reminisce


She hides.
Wants to surprise
Under the snow
of privacy.

Spontaneously
unobstructed
nature prepares…

Will old yesterday
brown and grey
clothes
become nowadays
quintessence/
zest
if tuned in new
frequency…

The best-
look within,
adjust to
5D see/set
view.

Pause. Reminisce.
As days continue
Snow melts.

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14 comments:

  1. Soon snow will be a memory of winter as spring will arrive!

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  2. I am an unabashed snow lover myself. Lovely poem :)

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  3. Snow can melt and never come back, I'll be happy at my shack

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  4. A refreshing mix of images filtered through with your words..
    Thank you

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  5. 5D...wow...my senses are expanding....smiles...
    i want snow!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. promise of Spring, lovely; hope is the greatest animation; have a nice Monday

    much love...

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  7. Such an interesting approach to a theme. I find your terse lines really deliver a potent message.

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  8. Good work here with the metaphor--especially those last lines.

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  9. Clever and telling write - Ienjoyed this... With best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  10. I especially like your close ~

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  11. "under the snow of privacy" love that...

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  12. I like that question. Will old yesterdays morph into something lovely? It seems we are able to do that when we adjust our lenses. Nice write!

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  13. As the snow melts and the heads of little flowers poke through, will we get a new lease of life too? Yes I think so.

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  14. It might just be, Sadly it can be stifled by the melting snow that reveals what shouldn't be. Nicely humbird!

    Hank

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