Sunday, December 30, 2012

The evidence's found!

Never been in city Noir,
kind of lured
to see your place -
no detail should be ignored:
whether shaking hands
or a gaze...

not a lot of words
or actions,
only thoughts
intend to turn
into feelings
and emotions
to attract
excitement's thorn...

clinging at the edge
of essence,
walking between scenes
of crime,
playing a hapless
grifter presence,
you detect the
private eye...

like a policeman,
plain clothes,
found the evidence -
a card!
a gift of poem's
enclosed -
witty, excellent
and smart.


  1. Wonderful images and words. Very interesting blog. Happy New Year.

  2. Thank you Nora for the compliment, very encouraging...Love your art as well! Thanks for joining my blog! Happy New Year to you and yours!

  3. Great imagery, especially the last verse, happy new year.

  4. Always appreciate your input, Pat!
    Have wonderful New Year!

  5. Thank you so much! Exellent New Year for you as well!