Sunday, June 12, 2016

before you fall apart...

MLMM ~ Writing Prompt #163, Collage #25


Cheer, cheer…
and cardinal appears -
a cycle, season’s call

keep faith
through year of days and nights
despite the errors

a broken branch
sometimes not fatal -
the sign of growth

a leaf, a fruit, a flower
you’re too big for fragile tree
stand tall – to feel your power

before you fall apart
the task – to recreate,
to plant new sprouts



Read more at: MLMM Writing Prompt #163, Collage #25

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17 comments:

  1. Sometimes we need to fall apart, so we can grow stronger roots and limbs. Leaves fall to make room for new buds to grow in the spring.

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  2. That is true, a broken branch doesn't mean it can't grow back stronger

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  3. So true that before one falls apart one should recreate for the next generation!!

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  4. I like the hopeful message in this poem. We do grow stronger in the broken places.

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  5. Enjoyed. Interesting line: you're too big for a fragile tree.

    Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Recreate before you fall apart.. the cycle of life has to keep humming!

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  7. A wonderful extended metaphor - there is so much peace to be gleaned from nature's lessons.

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  8. lovely, lovely. "Cheer, cheer… / and cardinal appears -" the lines are magical and vibrant with faith...

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  9. Where the tree breaks there is a line - one of mending and growth - just like bones - i love how this catches us before we fall apart - lovely to read your work again humbird :-)

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  10. a broken branch
    sometimes not fatal -
    the sign of growth

    This is a call to really care for oneself when the going is tough. Not to give up but fight to do good.

    Hank

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  11. Thank you so much, my friends, for thoughtful comments! Much Love!

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  12. Good message, reminder. Enjoyed.

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  13. Yes, it is brokeness that teaches us about our true power. Good write, good message!

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  14. I think we need to leave a little seed somewhere before we leave.

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  15. What a hopeful end....to stand tall and plant new sprouts...recreate ourselves again....wonderful poem!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  16. Isn't curious that most of the natural world knows what its purpose is yet humanity in its stupidity thinks success is destroying the natural world and disdain much of their own kind for a lifetime of profit. We have no idea of what standing tall means.

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