Tuesday, June 21, 2016

Back in time

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Summer fest
a princess weeping
under the willow

the whole oasis
near palm tree
passerby camels

a cruise-ship
Snow White route
over the rainbow edge

filled with yellow sunbeams
a shrine I built
in my prayer


* 12 words to use for this Tokubetsudesu haiku challenge

13 comments:

  1. What could come due from a little view and spell of the surroundings.

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  2. luv the shrine you built,

    much love...

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  3. each haiku builds on the other...so beautiful, especially the two last ones...wow, Snow White route over the rainbow edge...what a delightful shrine!!!

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  4. Thank you all! Appreciate very much your comments!

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  5. these are wonderful! 1 and 4 are my favorites

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  6. I really liked these, they went well with the photo as well.

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  7. Enjoyed all of these, but I do have a thing for willow trees so the first one is my favorite.

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  8. An imaginative write...first and third in series are my personal favs :)

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  9. Thank you so much! Great inspiration!

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