Sunday, February 21, 2016

Collage 17: you made me feel

~ Mindlovemisery's Menagerie ~


You made me feel
so exceptional
so casual & painful
in same time
as day’s sun
penetrated the shoulders,
the retina of our eyes
teasing & tearing
the shadows apart
dared us to wear
sunglasses
to look in the
darkness first
at the corners at
gates closed
for strangers
and gods –
starving hermits
at home with
guitar soul plucking the
last whole strings
of touchless mosaic
treasury chest
blurry patterns
of which we create
in disguise…


Read more at: Mindlovemisery's Menagerie Writing Prompt:Collage #17

6 comments:

  1. One little look can send feelings every which way indeed

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  2. Lovely response to the collage. Yes you can feel that full range of emotion in one day.....

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  3. I love your choice of words in this, the visuals such as "teasing and tearing apart shadows" powerfully done!

    mindlovemisery

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  4. Yours words have brightened my day as well!

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