Wednesday, October 14, 2015

Carving soul

d'Verse Poetic ~ Carved in stone


I’ve sensed your soul
in the depth of the
century

Promoted the den(s) city
to family falling
rocks, mountains

Shoulders, spine bent
long ears – open
to farewell

Crushed
in the grinder
of age

A m a z e… we found
unconsciously follow
in the spiral
of carving…

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10 comments:

  1. Getting crushed by age can sure make one carve out a new way

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  2. Very vivid emotions, well done.

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  3. I’ve sensed your soul
    in the depth of the
    century............. lovely

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  4. I specially like the opening line.. these carvings with a soul ~

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  5. I liked your opening lines: "I've sensed your soul in the depth of the century"...pretty profound.

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  6. I agree with the others the opening really sets the tone as the carving speaks to you.

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  7. Oh.. art of human old and new..
    follows the innate.. instinctual
    and intuitive.. of letting reason
    go.. and being flow..
    where paint becomes
    human instead
    of reason..
    and what comes
    does come as
    real human
    magic
    of art
    then
    and now..
    a philosophers
    stOne of heArT..:)

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  8. "I’ve sensed your soul
    in the depth of the
    century"...........beautiful...

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  9. I can feel that soul.. almost like if my finger reached and touched the past...Wonderful

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