Saturday, September 17, 2016

a dew

deviantart.com ~ by magic xb dafp


grief
loaded in a blue dew
filled the puddle

how many of us
with transient tickets
expired



9 comments:

  1. Trickle away until a brighter day

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  2. A heaviness here. Written very well.

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  3. ahh dew you can call it tears of night until the sun rays fill in them a glitter and turn it into morning's smile .
    beautiful writing

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  4. such sadness in these lovely haiku.

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  5. grief can fill many a puddles at times.. good when there's a friend to talk to or just to sit with you.. reminded me of job a bit you know

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  6. Thank you so much to all my readers for thoughtful comments!

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  7. Yes indeed, but oh this image is very thought-provoking!

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