Thursday, January 7, 2016

Moving loudly

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awakened at night
restless behind the window
ghost wind breath

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disconsolate voice
approaching...then moves away
crying child

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agitated clouds
color sky-drop discotheque
dancing with stars




Read more at:  Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille: movement

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

5 comments:

  1. I wouldn't mind being awakened if something like that I saw

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    1. I do it all the time with such a chime...

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  2. Very nice response Humbird ... movement caught in three lines.

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  3. Awakened most nights these days with similar voices and imagery☺
    Enjoyed.

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