Friday, December 18, 2015

know where to walk...

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Walking, walking…
oak in December mood
wood still
till wind blow
low degrees
trees trembling
inked skies
eyes are squeezed
is the weather warm enough?
ruff! ruff! – a dog guarding door
for next two months
chance for a big snow
knowing where is New Year Star, akin
kings walking, walking…

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18 comments:

  1. Pat HattDecember 18, 2015 at 6:41 PM

    I'd like to be walking far far away from where any snow would come

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  2. Anthony DuceDecember 19, 2015 at 10:13 AM

    The words are enough here. Enjoyed.

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  3. Gillena CoxDecember 20, 2015 at 2:59 PM

    Humbird, thanks for taking us along on your winter walk, Warm wishes

    much love...

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  4. ZQDecember 20, 2015 at 3:13 PM

    delightful style... enjoyed the read.
    ZQ

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  5. scotthastiepoetDecember 20, 2015 at 4:56 PM

    Unique voice as always... I especially liked:

    "Low degrees
    trees trembling
    inked skies
    eyes are squeezed..." Very once.... Have a great Christmas... With Best Wishes Scott

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  6. TruedessaDecember 20, 2015 at 5:19 PM

    Your poems always take an interesting path...these lines below remind me of winter as the trees are now bare waiting to put on spring clothes. Merry Christmas!

    trees trembling
    inked skies

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  7. MaryDecember 20, 2015 at 6:23 PM

    This is quite a journey, Humbird. I like the idea of walking...wherever the journey leads.

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  8. Sherry Blue SkyDecember 20, 2015 at 7:49 PM

    I, too, especially like the trees trembling, inked skies.......

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  9. Sumana RoyDecember 21, 2015 at 12:15 AM

    I like this slice of the winter scene....

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  10. DonnaDecember 21, 2015 at 4:40 AM

    Oh I am transported on this winter walk....just as I experience it...fabulous:

    'ill wind blow
    low degrees
    trees trembling
    inked skies
    eyes are squeezed
    is the weather warm enough?'

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  11. Jae RoseDecember 21, 2015 at 6:55 AM

    I love how that dog bark grounds us as we flit between then and now...it is always good to have some kind of grounding xo

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  12. Brother OllieDecember 21, 2015 at 7:28 AM

    Cool - you keep hitting the reader with vivid images.

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  13. Amrit SinhaDecember 21, 2015 at 8:38 AM

    Christmas, and then New Year, just round the corner.

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  14. Myrna R.December 21, 2015 at 10:35 AM

    Great walking journey. Have a Merry Christmas.

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  15. Sanaa RizviDecember 21, 2015 at 1:35 PM

    So very wise & profound :D

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  16. brudbergDecember 21, 2015 at 4:05 PM

    I love the thought of walking..

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  17. Purba chakrabortyDecember 22, 2015 at 1:47 AM

    Beautifully expressed.
    Merry Christmas :)

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  18. SusanDecember 25, 2015 at 8:36 AM

    DO we know? Did they know? Or was it the hope that manifested all? AS I pray this Christmas morn, I contemplate these questions and pray for our future.

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