Saturday, May 30, 2015

Passing time

'The passing of the time' by Priscilla Santana ~ deviantart.com


His grown thin transparent skin
exposed to keen observer,          
the witness of life still running
through veins, arthritic bones.

Embraced by vascular dystonia,
shriveled, while at core –
Rodin’s thinker and trickster,
requires returning the throne... 



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9 comments:

  1. I see and feel as if his life is abandoning him and he can do nothing

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  2. Quite sad to think of them there, still having the symbolence of life, but what kind of life to be just there trapped in your thoughts seemingly.

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  3. Wanting to live life but unable to move, ugg sad fate

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  4. Sort of puts me in the mind of those romances where the gent is really much older and the wife is just waiting to inherit the goods.

    I never thought of 'The Thinker' as a trickster... but with all that time on his hands...
    Thanks for stopping by my piece on the prompt. :)

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  5. A very interesting piece indeed .. wonderfully complex. Bastet

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  6. "the witness of life still running through veins"---what very creative and unique wording--such a stunning description, really.

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