Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Captivation

by hilariagalleries ~ pinterest



Receding moon ring
burst light between Earth and Sun
the diamond imprint
           I keep in my heart the spring
                                   Insight, a matching island…

Read more at: Mid-Week Motif PU ~ Captivity with Susan

Heeding Haiku With HA Mindlovemisery's Menagerie : Spring

27 comments:

  1. Beautiful Haiku... depicting the theme with grace and splendor! :)
    xoxo

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  2. I love this take on the prompt - held captive by the moon, by Light, and keeping in your heart Spring...lovely.

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    1. Lovely! sounds like the moon offers you hope for spring. I have to agree the past two nights that moon was amazing' I even stood out in the cold for a while last night.

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  3. That which captivates is captured as well, and used in our poems. An intriguing little gem! I wish all captivity could be as benign!

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  4. Yes, I like that we can keep beauty captive in our hearts.

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  5. to be captivated and mesmerized by the beauty of what we see is a blessing. same feeling when a reader is captivated by the beauty of the poem he/she is reading.

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  6. Lots of fun earth play. Quite the pic too

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  7. There is a sense of contentment in this and hope..as echoed in the picture..spring will come.. xo

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  8. A beautiful Tanka to be cherished forever...

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  9. Today I wish I had the time and the right read, to pursue the image your words inspire here..
    Enjoyed

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  11. Thank you, my friends for kind words and inspiration! Much Love :)x

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  12. Gorgeous! Such an unique 'diamond' is enticing.....It spirals me down a lazy route!! :)

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  13. Keeping spring in one's heart always - that is the way to live!

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  14. Ooo...I love the galactic feeling of your poem as well and the echo of the ring...beautiful!

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  15. with spring in the heart nothing can go wrong...i so long for spring...

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  16. I like that diamond imprint ~ can't wait for spring, smiles ~

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  17. Spring, brings forth new beginnings.

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  18. Nice. May Spring be in your heart always.

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  19. A happy poem, capturing the beauty well.

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  20. A fan of all things moon, including the New Moon - next New Moon is April 18th :)

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  21. Keeping spring captive in your heart is a good idea !

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