Sunday, February 22, 2015

Yearning

hd-wallpaper, pastel


Craving
Tiny delicate petals
Falling

Hopeless parachutes
Umbrella perched uncut posts
By blue river


by Brenda Warren


Read more at: Sunday Whirl

Shared with PU Poetry Pantry

26 comments:

  1. I sense a yearning for spring both in your words and pastel image. Soft and dreamlike,

    Elizabeth

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  2. So clever of you using almost all of them in such small space!! Bravo!!

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  3. You used these words to perfection to create interesting poetic pictures!

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  4. Some interesting imagery here, Humbird!

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  5. I am craving for those petals ~ Good job on the weaving of words ~

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  6. my fav falling petals are the cherry blossoms...so beautiful...
    i love standing in their rain...

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  7. Petals are both delicate and beautiful, especially in spring when the trees are in bloom. I long for them too.

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  8. The falling petals are indeed like parachutes.. what a bless to stand in such a rain.

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  9. Never a dull moment on this site. Always enjoy my visit here.
    ZQ

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  10. I am yearning for this same spring with these wonderful images!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  11. Hopeless as they fall and bring about life

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  12. Spring and cherryblossoms welcome at my doorstep too

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  13. What greater longing do we have but for spring when both we and nature can burst forth with life again.

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  14. Nice and tidy!

    https://miskmask.wordpress.com/2015/02/22/before-i-was-called-back-home/

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  15. What a beautifully succinct piece..in cutting down you have magnifyied the yearning and illuminated those falling petals

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  16. A creative way to talk about trees, "uncut posts"

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  17. the blue river there in the close for me catches the falling petals and parachutes...

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  18. nice, whimsical; have a good week

    much love...

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  19. Enjoyed.
    And I was a child here for a moment, blowing from a dead dandelion.

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  20. For me its the opposite, I find it flowing so smoothly:)

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  21. Thank you so much, my friends, for inspirational comments! Spring is at the corner! Much Love to all! :)x

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  22. Beautiful art to complement your words of desire for the upcoming season. Here, on the island, it's almond blossoms that will float so dreamily to the ground, laying the path for spring.

    Poppy

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  23. this was a dreamy post!!! and a lovely imagery there!

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