Sunday, February 1, 2015

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Magpie Tales ~ Tess Kincaid


As winter sun’s measured the sky
with pesky clouds
spreading its dazzling cold beams
to please a crowd...

he prefers the heart race
to the state of rescue humility;
be-bop restless measures to
ticking away the moments 
spending in peace...


still
there’s a shot in the locker!


by Brenda Warren


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20 comments:

  1. I am still working out how she got up there...and why? When she could be dancing!

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    1. Good questions...for another prompt, I guess.

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  2. I am still working out how she got up there...and why? When she could be dancing!

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  3. You guys just need those pesky clouds to go away !

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  4. i like the energy in that second stanza....its got a cool beat kinda rhythm to it....and we all have our preferences....

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  5. haha some just like to watch while others be the fool

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  6. "He prefers the heart race..." As do so many of us.

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  7. Yes, there is still unfinished business somewhere! Wonderful write humbird!

    Hank

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  8. oh heck - that shot in the locker there in the close was kinda unexpected...

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  9. That ending was so unexpected Humbird ~ Good shocker, ha ~

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  10. I think my comment was consumed :) let me just say, this makes me want to dance.

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  11. Yes wonderful last line..pretending is the worst...peace in ourselves the best xo

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  12. Such a creative piece you've crafted from the word list. I agree your ending was so unexpected.

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