Friday, February 20, 2015

Pisces tides

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The peace Pisces tides
brought me your words,
sighs, syllables
have not pronounced,
clashed/confronted
with other you,
withered not –
craved
to embracing together-
ness of comfort,
a beautiful
view.

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9 comments:

  1. "withered no" ... I love that phrase.

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  2. i see tides in the opening line as a verb...
    inner peace is the fishes greatest strength...
    a cool play on the sign that started yesterday

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  3. The way your words goes from the abstract to the reality to the far away to the closeness - there is a zooming effect that I really like.

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  4. This is truly beautiful. Lots of beautiful romanticism...

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  5. Such an embrace can comfort indeed

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  6. Enjoyed, although as usual, I’m not ready to leave the depths of Aquarius yet☺

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  7. brings peace… well, the world is certainly ready for that.

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  8. I like the peace of those tides ~ Very comforting ~

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  9. thanks for adding this peaceful pen ~

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