Thursday, May 3, 2018

talking river

at dawn
sun's kissing the silky sky
the road spins

 the isles enchanted by
an azure river's spell


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4 comments:

  1. Pat HattMay 6, 2018 at 6:13 AM

    Could sit and listen and hear the speak.

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  2. Anthony DuceMay 6, 2018 at 9:45 AM

    Enjoyed,
    Wonderful thoughts..

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  3. Kim M. RussellMay 7, 2018 at 1:39 AM

    I love the movement in 'the road spins' and the way your tanka ends with 'an azure river's spell'. Enchanting!

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleMay 13, 2018 at 3:43 PM

    Listening to the river's words ... thank you for this beauty.

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