Sunday, January 15, 2017

milestone


milestone of tomorrow
in today small steps
around the pond
snowflakes or sleet
crows in the midst of unknown


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13 comments:

  1. First line - I got stuck - like it a lot!

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  2. Nice, the words fit in perfect with time.

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  3. Can sure get there with time to spare

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  4. Not as many to reach these days though am enjoying the small steps☺
    Enjoyed.

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  5. Beautiful words, and your photo is delightful!

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  6. A very nicely created, but complex, tanka. The complexity of time caught in those five lines.

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    1. thank you, Kristjaan. I wish I could be everywhere ...at least in spirit....

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  7. Small steps make all the difference...especially when taken into account in totality...

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  8. A nice short piece. Well done. Thank you. Love love, Andrew. Bye.

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