Saturday, November 12, 2016

behind the closed doors

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full moon
opening in the parking
lot on the roof
your pained face is looming
behind the closed doors


Read more at: Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #13, tanka, lofty style

6 comments:

  1. A tanka that ripples with a myriad of emotions to me, mysterious and vivid. You caught the 'loftiness.'

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  2. Sometimes need to kick the door open to see the light

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  3. We never know what's behind closed doors!

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  4. A good place to watch, to contemplate the moon. Enjoyed..

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  5. While it may be promising one can't help but realize it may not be so!

    Hank

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