Tuesday, July 5, 2016

with bare feet

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with bare feet
running on sizzling hot asphalt-
sensations of childhood
closer now as new pavement-
everywhere


*Here is the first line "with bare feet" by Khalil Gibran used to create a new tanka. 

Read more at: CARPE DIEM HAIKU, Tokubetsudesu, first line

6 comments:

  1. Sure more paths paved as the feet feel the heat

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  2. I can feel every single word!

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  3. you composed some fine lines with the prompt :-)

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  4. the stained glass brings this haiku to life - sizzling

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