Saturday, May 28, 2016

a slice of blue sea

a slice of blue sea


temple in the sky
the road opens
a slice of blue sea
                     ©Ubuge (pen name of Robert Gibson)

so many crossroads lie...
a head spins with a scent of seaweed
©Humbird


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5 comments:

  1. Can make your head spin with how many there are

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  2. Ouf!! so many interpretations to this, I can smell that scent, hear the gulls mocking as I ponder on my next path. I could see this as the opening of a novel...or a haiku on its own
    many crossroads lie...
    a head spins -
    a scent of seaweed

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  3. You have created a wonderful scene with your continuation Humbird ... a scene I can almost feel, smell, touch, hear and see ... well done

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