Friday, September 25, 2015

Shining thoughts


My thoughts - dancing, prancing horses to whip up the poem;even dirty obstacles become luxury of inspiration, rolling on railings through the open windows of subdued apartment, where the primadonna at the balcony singing in the golden voice, breaking glass bricks of misunderstanding…
         Prepare the horses
      ahead of the winter
      to hear “Jingle bells”


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20 comments:

  1. A few obstacles can inspire and help us break free, as jingle bells comes a playing

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  2. Ah yes, it brings happy moments to mind, and well, winter!

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  3. it is precious when even obstacles turn into inspiration and opens up new paths... i once rode in a horse sledge carriage through a wintery forest and we sang jingle bells - it was amazing - your last lines brought back those memories

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  4. "even dirty obstacles become luxury of inspiration," it's good when that happens...love the end haiku...

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  5. I think those jingle-bells could be the thing that would bring joy to the dread of winter.

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  6. LOVE this:
    "breaking glass bricks of misunderstanding"

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  7. I've got spurs that jingle jangle jingle...
    as I go ridin' merrily along...

    not sure why that popped in my head

    sometimes obstacles can become inspirational...

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  8. I love the breaking of the glass bricks of ,misunderstanding. May they all break, and hearts heal.

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  9. in no time that season will arrive. lovely

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  10. Wonderful haibun! the short poem at the end is excellent. Spencer is Kanzensakura.

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  11. oh my, you've done it!!! you've paved the way for Christmas! yaaaay! love your humorous and forthcoming tone!

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  12. of course 88days away isnt a lot

    much love...

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  13. breaking glass bricks of misunderstanding…

    Such a gorgeous notion.. I do hope this comes true.. as we all need a clean slate.

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  14. I loved the primadonna at the balcony....nice touch!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  15. I am not sure I am quite ready to hear "Jingle Bells," but I do know preparation is in order!

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  16. Christmas is coming way too fast this year.
    Hard to believe it is less than 3 months away.
    There is certainly preparation to be made.

    Anything can be inspiration, often it is all about
    our perspective.

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  17. I love the distillation of thought...i could picture the scene clear as crystal...fine as thought

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  18. Even dirty, even broken ....bring on the horses and the bells!

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  19. "dirty obstacles"

    I can't help but think of the tired and filthy piles of snow beside the roads in New England after a long winter. (I lived there as a child.) You did wonders with these words!

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