Wednesday, July 8, 2015

Agreement

Nicolas Carone, Shadow Dance, 2007



Under the quilts
Bones trembling
In sync

Crawled in heart
Cracked
Splintered doubts

Clay/grain escape
Shadows-crows
Open field fate…

by Brenda Warren


Read more at: Sunday Whirl #206

7 comments:

  1. There is a lot of tactile feel to this - the bones trembling - while visual, its very concrete. The crack in the second one only adds to it. And the grain in the last. Any way, a very sensory piece to me.

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  2. Image my head of drama involving elderly love…

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  3. The crack of bones while making umm groans? lol

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  4. This has a mystical feel..something from another time..a bit haunting..

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