Wednesday, June 3, 2015

Things after springs

Heeding Haiku With HA



Vision frantic hands –
Shake – not in the touch much more
Stained with salt/fault/ache

Pain absorbed in depth
Into trials-errors path
Strengthen heart length will.


Sunday's Whirligig #10


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20 comments:

  1. I thought that was lovely, well written!

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  2. It is good to have the gloves to protect a bit,
    but depending on the work, it is quite refreshing
    to have that ache.

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  3. two hands helping out, can go far, but gloves are nice

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  4. Wow, this is clever and fun!

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  5. "Pain absorbed in depth" stands out for me. Very well penned. :-)
    -HA

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  6. Many stories can be found in looking at a persons hands..all the lines a path back and forward xo

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  7. How beautiful this is, I agree with Jae, I love hands and so much can be read from them

    mindlovemisery

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  8. I especially like how you combined the prompts--well done.

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  9. i wish we could protect our heart like our hand sometimes... really they should invent heart-gloves - ha

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  10. This speaks to an inner me that adores the resonance produced.

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  11. This is beautiful ... loved the depth :-)

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  12. Maybe it is the hands connecting that make all the difference... ? maybe the brine can be diluted in togetherness.

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  13. I loved how you used the prompt's picture of gloves to add your own illustration of hands in mutual linking of trust.

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  14. Hands can and do tell stories, of life lived well and with care,

    Elizabeth

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  15. Nicely done ... cool how you mixed the prompts so well! Bastet

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